I felt one of the outcomes I improved on during this project was integrating ideas. I felt I was able to relate information and ideas from different authors within each of my paragraphs while making sure all of it related back to my thesis. For example, in one of my paragraphs, I discuss how social media causes teens to feel like they need to change or hide their identity. I used ideas from Boyd and Greenfield to explain this concept, and I feel I was able to successfully connect them. I added a transition to connect the similar ideas and then connected it back to my original idea of the paragraph. Overall, I think I was able to add information from other sources that worked well with the points I was trying to make within each paragraph. I was also able to use multiple sources to add to my naysayer paragraph.
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